First draft of my magazine cover

This is my first draft of my music magazine cover, I am happy with the way the actor is modelled and positioned, however I do not like the positioning of the words. I need to add my masthead for my magazine. I have shown my magazine to a small focus group who gave me ideas on what I can change. They also told me what they did not like about my magazine cover and one member of the audience said the line underneath 'Shattered' did not look right. I will listen to the feedback I received and work upon it.